Character development


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Posted by randy (216.27.179.160) on December 11, 2004 at 03:55:08:

In Reply to: You guys are dispicable! posted by Beverly on December 10, 2004 at 20:14:24:

Nice first try!

Try adding more dimension to your fantasy characters. Give Beverly a job title and develop the scene where she discovers her husband. Maybe get her to sneek peeks at him over a long period and decide whether to talk to her friends about it.


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