Posted by nzTom (202.154.157.204) on December 11, 2004 at 04:43:42:
In Reply to: Character development posted by randy on December 11, 2004 at 03:55:08:
: Nice first try!
Is it going to be a stage play, movie or just a fantasy story?
Stephen King might give you more hints if you want to make it a horror story.
Personally, I would develop it as an awesome porno vid, but like randy says, you will need to take more time developing the plot.
You need to follow the attention to diet and exercise, the newfound interest in yoga and pilates classes, and the hour long stretching sessions after weight training. Wonder about the appearance of a youthful looking six-pack.
I give you 2 out of 10. I think you can do better next time. Please re-write this assignment.