Posted by Beverly (205.188.116.65) on December 11, 2004 at 23:29:23:
In Reply to: Character development posted by randy on December 11, 2004 at 03:55:08:
Oh, if only it were a "fantasy scene"! My husband, I'll call him Zeke, has gone to a hotel for the weekend. My fantasy, young man from Sodom or Gomorrah, was ended yesterday by my probably gay husband. I've always done everything he asked-with pleasure. He's always been very sexy, well built and sweet. I gave him fellatio on our first date; he doesn't need to do what I have always done for him. We are both professors at a nearby college, and the girls are always trying to bed him down. Now I wonder if it's the boys he really wants. Why else would a guy do this? He must want a penis in his mouth! I can't write any more...
: Nice first try!
: Try adding more dimension to your fantasy characters. Give Beverly a job title and develop the scene where she discovers her husband. Maybe get her to sneek peeks at him over a long period and decide whether to talk to her friends about it.