Posted by Beverly (205.188.116.65) on December 11, 2004 at 23:37:41:
In Reply to: Re: Character development posted by nzTom on December 11, 2004 at 04:43:42:
As an english prof and an avid S. King reader, I cannot (since catching my husband in this horrid one-act play) get the line from "Salem's Lot" out of my head--"and then there were the sucking sounds." Ladies: come to my aid! These slobbering men think this is a joke. Tell me ladies, do you think this is okay for your man to do? I've done it "all" for my beautiful husband. And yes, he has been doing yoga, and he has always had a "six pack." Is my husband gay?
: : Nice first try!
: Is it going to be a stage play, movie or just a fantasy story?
: Stephen King might give you more hints if you want to make it a horror story.
: Personally, I would develop it as an awesome porno vid, but like randy says, you will need to take more time developing the plot.
: You need to follow the attention to diet and exercise, the newfound interest in yoga and pilates classes, and the hour long stretching sessions after weight training. Wonder about the appearance of a youthful looking six-pack.
: I give you 2 out of 10. I think you can do better next time. Please re-write this assignment.